2024年英语作文评分标准是什么

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一、英语作文评分标准是什么

各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档(21~25分)
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
1. 覆盖所有内容要点。
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
3. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致
4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
5. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第四档(16~20分)
完成了试题规定的任务。
1. 虽漏掉一两个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。
2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
3. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
4. 应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
5. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(11~15分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
1. 虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。
2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。
4. 应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
5. 整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(6~10分)
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
1. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。
2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。
4. 较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
5. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(1~5分)
未完成试题规定的任务。
1. 明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。
2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
3. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。
4. 缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
5. 信息未能传达给读者。

二、 怎么写好高考英语作文

一、得高分的“亮点”

1.改变句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词做状语等。

[原文]we met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.

[修正]early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.

[原文]the young man couldn't help crying when he heard the bad news.

[修正]hearing the bad news,the young man couldn't help crying.

2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。

①强调句

[原文]my parents praised ah fu warmly. it had saved my little sister bravely.

[修正]my parents praised ah fu warmly. it was our brave ah fu who had saved my little sister bravely.

②由what等引导的从句,此处的what相当于中文的“所……”,有很大的概括力,如:

[原文]we had to stand there to catch the offender.

[修正]what we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.

what china has achieved in recent years is known through the world.

china is no longer what it used to be.

③由with或without引导的短语。如:

he sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.

④分词短语。如:

satisfied with the result, he decided to go on with a new experiment.

⑤倒装句。如:

only in this way can we achieve our goal.

never before have i seen such a wonderful film.

⑥省略句。如:

if so, victory will be ours.

you can make some changes wherever necessary.

⑦对比,这是中文中也常用的方法。如:

failure is not a crime, but failure to learn from failure is.

when i play, i feel excited, and after it i feel relaxed.

3.通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

[原文]he stopped us half an hour ago. he made us catch the next offender.

[修正]he stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.

[原文]we had a short rest. then we began to play happily. we sang and danced.

some told stories. some played chess.

[修正]after a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing,telling jokes and playing chess.

4.学会使用过渡词。如:

①递进: then(然后), besides(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)等。

②转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the country(相反), after all(毕竟)等。

③总结: finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(总之), in conclusion(最后)等。

④强调: indeed(确实), certainly(一定), surely(确定), above all(尤其)等。

⑤对比: in the same way(同样地), just as(正如), on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。

5.注意使用不同长度的句子。

二、较复杂的词汇

1.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:

[原文]a new railway is being built in my hometown.

[修正]a new railway is under construction in my hometown.

2.使用一些很有“洋味”的单词。如:

thank you for sharing the time with us.

the way he views the world is very practical.

3.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:

[原文]i like reading while my brother likes watching television.

[修正]i like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

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